Alrite i think this is about right.. if not comment the changes and i'll sort it out hopefully..
cheers Ronan,
Please comment..
Intro:
x 2
You said you'd marry me if i was 23
but i'm one that you can't see if i'm only 18
tell me who made these rules
obviously not you
who are you answering to?
oh, jenny don't be hasty
no, don't treat me like a baby
let me take you where you'll let me
because leaving just upsets me
Same structure throughout